rivers of flesh and machine
My re-posted tag is one below this one...scroll down
Ebb n flow
Traffic flo
Quick
Slow
Metal n flesh
Strange synergy
Nervous energy
Mass death
Last breath
Just a small push
Of pedal
Unaware
Metal
Robotic
Undulating
Street dances
Alternate advances
Flesh flowing
Through gaps growing
Shrinking..
Slinking
Through
Around..
Robotic..
Hypnotic..
Beep
Shout
Beep
BLEEP
get me outta here
.
Labels: B
posted by David_on_the_Lake at 11:38 AM
17 Comments:
WOW.
Awesome.
I love this.
(But you made me feel like I'm back in the city, and I don't want to feel that way...)
totally feels like being in the city.. precisely why i left.
you captured the feeling so well!
write a book already!!
I miss the city. I miss the flow of peoples' strides and the distracted yet focused look everyone has. I have a picture like this from times sq, but from the evening. I'm gonna send it to you.
dreamer..
Thanks..
well.the citys not all that bad...It certainly stimulates great ideas..and you get to observe so much of the human condition..
m00kie...
lol..oy..that bad?
Thanks.
still looking for a competent agent..
:-P
sara...
distracted yet focused...you said it..
Thanks..
You definitely know how to make me feel like I am the city..
david - there's a lot of the human condition that i don't care to observe... lol...
especially in the city. I'll leave the observing to you.
have a wonderful shabbos!
the city, eh?
we got a love-hate relationship, me an it.
love the piece, great goin
gud shabbos
not much of a city lover huh..
swfm...
see? I saved u a token..
dreamer...
lol..
ok..with pleasure..
chana...
Thanks..I'd love to hear about it..
allie...
Nooo I Love the city..
I love the energy...the culture..even the subway..its alive..
Me too.. from this post though, you seem to have chosen to portray a more negative side
A nice one. The city is both thrilling and crazy.
BTW I tagged you on my blog...http://purposefullygrounded.blogspot.com/2007/07/tag-im-it.html
Now that you mention the subway... when i went to russia and took the metro in moscow, the other girls i was with complained about the smell, and i just took a deep breath in and said "ahhh... smells like home..."
lol.
allie...
the positives and negatives are all fascinating to me...
mrs. jude...
Yup thats the big city for you..
Thanks for the tag..I did it a few months ago but I'll repost it again following this post..
the dreamer...
lol
The Moscow Metro happens to be an underground palace and is extremely efficient, clean and opulent..
My next post is about the subway experience..
david - i know. it's an absolutely magnificent place... a shame the people aren't as wealthy as the metro looks...
(i really said that it smells like home, btw.)
dreamer...
theyre getting there..
Moscow was recently ranked the most expensive city on earth..
(ohh you meant home HOME...like you're house?
:-P)
you're=your
david - lol.
Post a Comment
<< Home