Friday, March 27, 2009

English Song - One by One


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Kinda floating this one out there..
I have absolutely no experience in arranging and mixing..and I think it shows..but that wont stop me..
:-)

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7 Comments:

Anonymous Eve said...

something tells me you wouldn't let anything stop you.

hey, if you think you can, then you probably can.

it's nice. wrote the lyrics yourself?
they seem very...you.

March 27, 2009 4:16 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

You wantmy critique?

The beginning is a bit off tune...
So are many of the harmonies...
And your singing isn't synchronized to the beats...
The harmonies are too loud; they overpower the regular vocals...

The lyrics are good... can still be worked on; polished a bit.

And you're having way too much fun with the effects. Let the song speak for it self; don't drown it out with synthesizers that you think sound cool. It jut detracts.

But overall, it has potential.
:)

March 29, 2009 12:02 PM  
Blogger grinfish said...

whats going on? david on the lake going public???

i agree.. let your songs be... skip all the ...
extra detractors....

March 29, 2009 1:58 PM  
Anonymous Anony said...

I don't care what anyone says lol...I love it!
It's beautiful. The tune, the words...all of it.
Before it ends up on some cd, someone will perfect the little details. But meanwhile, I keep listening to it, and loving it.
Keep them coming!

March 30, 2009 12:47 PM  
Blogger Almost Frum Cougar said...

Again, your voice gives me an emotional reaction! Wonderful!

May 12, 2009 11:34 AM  
Blogger SIS said...

Wow. I really like this! The message, the tune, the vocals, and yes, the special effects too :-) Thanks for sharing!

March 11, 2010 2:59 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Thanks
:-)

March 16, 2010 12:35 PM  

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