English Song - One by One
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Kinda floating this one out there..
I have absolutely no experience in arranging and mixing..and I think it shows..but that wont stop me..
:-)
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posted by David_on_the_Lake at 12:10 PM
Friday, March 27, 2009
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Kinda floating this one out there..
I have absolutely no experience in arranging and mixing..and I think it shows..but that wont stop me..
:-)
.
7 Comments:
something tells me you wouldn't let anything stop you.
hey, if you think you can, then you probably can.
it's nice. wrote the lyrics yourself?
they seem very...you.
You wantmy critique?
The beginning is a bit off tune...
So are many of the harmonies...
And your singing isn't synchronized to the beats...
The harmonies are too loud; they overpower the regular vocals...
The lyrics are good... can still be worked on; polished a bit.
And you're having way too much fun with the effects. Let the song speak for it self; don't drown it out with synthesizers that you think sound cool. It jut detracts.
But overall, it has potential.
:)
whats going on? david on the lake going public???
i agree.. let your songs be... skip all the ...
extra detractors....
I don't care what anyone says lol...I love it!
It's beautiful. The tune, the words...all of it.
Before it ends up on some cd, someone will perfect the little details. But meanwhile, I keep listening to it, and loving it.
Keep them coming!
Again, your voice gives me an emotional reaction! Wonderful!
Wow. I really like this! The message, the tune, the vocals, and yes, the special effects too :-) Thanks for sharing!
Thanks
:-)
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