Friday, October 30, 2009

momentary gift..


the leaves were falling..
like a colorful blizzard..
the air was thick with..
the sweet scent of autumn..
and..was heavy with a sad..
kinda nostalgia..like
train stations..and..
they stood there..
.....all seven there was
cheery April..
bright eyed May..
fun loving June and July..
lazy August..
fashionable..September..
and October..just plain cool..
.....and me
with my winter valice..
..the memories..filling the air
between us...

I turned to head North...
when they said..

wait...

we have a little
gift for you..
a little something
we wont be needing..
until we come back..
use it well..
and enjoy...this
....extra hour


and they disappeared over the darkening horizon..


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6 Comments:

Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

uh
no one got this?

November 02, 2009 3:14 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

actually, this was my favorite piece. (im just a visitor, not a comment-er)

November 02, 2009 7:52 PM  
Anonymous chav said...

i
did
:)

November 02, 2009 7:53 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

my confidence has been restored..lol
thanks

November 04, 2009 12:18 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

based on my visits alone, you probably have many more poeple appreciating your writings without leaving their comments...

November 09, 2009 12:29 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Thanks anon

November 09, 2009 10:38 PM  

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