the realization
.
He sat there off to the side..
listening...just listening
.......for 3 straight days
listening to endless opinions
to men and their ideas
their arguments..and outlooks
to their impassioned debates
to utter stupidity
time and time
again...
when his eyes suddenly lit up
as this realization crept up
his psyche like an army
of marching ants..
...and although he'd suspected it
all along
he was not really sure
...until now
it excited him
to no end
...and terrified him
all at once
He looked around and felt sorry for them..
.........and for himself
as he was destined to share this earth
with.....them
for he was now thoroughly convinced
that he....and he alone
was the only man on earth
........with common sense
But he knew that only inward
only inward...
...will he find his peace
for one cannot preach common sense
to those that have no receptors
so alas
he stood up
threw out his empty styrofoam cup
and continued on his lonely way...
.
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6 Comments:
i love this one.
i really feel it.
an epic autobiography
if ever i'd read one
:)
but..
..sigh.
:(
and the line at the end, it's so you.
very well done.
I'd think you should calm down on the periods?
Good stuff.
So...he believes that he's the only one with common sense. But, obviously, all the others out there also think they have plenty of it.
Are we making the assumption that he is right? Is he?
Thanks...
Thinker..
Asking me that is akin to asking George Serat "If all those dots are necessary"
Welcome to my blog..
Could always use some thinkers.
Mystery..
It's irrelevant what others think.
i think we all have moments in life were thoughts like these hit us suddenly- but i think that sense of thrill and fear- as you put it- ussually fades a soon as it came :)
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