There are forces...
There are forces..
That force us
to admit {pray}
We love our cars (bod
ies)
We love our speed (fun)
We love feeling BIGger {immortal}
But there are forces
Forces like forward motion {d_ath}
And {grav}ity
and so we’re betrayed
{feels like it}
Flung {fling}
Trapped {depr
rest shh} laid to
..and we hate it.. {but who cares?}
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posted by David_on_the_Lake at 10:57 PM
13 Comments:
gosh. i had to read that about six times before i got it...
and i still don't think i got all of it.
care to explain, so i don't feel like a fool?
disturbing a bit. i think. maybe.
Fantastic!!!
dreamer...
Its kinda hard to explain...
Its a sensory poem..u have to flow along with the words...
It's sort of a stark view of our loves and their trappings (literally)..and the metaphor for life and its trappings..following the poem in parhentesis..with some arrangements and omissions to help in the sensory experience..
sarah...
well..the subject matter is such..
come running...
thanks!
aha... I hear ya.
shhh, shhhh, I think it's all gonna be ok...
but I don't know.
it kinda reminds me of something, but i can't remember what...
fajita...
ye..nobdy knows..
dreamer...
hmm well..this is written somewhat in the style of the poet
e e cummings
I even alluded to his name by leaving out 2 Es..
well, yeah, i knew that... i was actually gonna write that it reminded me of his style... but i'm trying to remember something else...
what's that poem about differences between young and old... reading between the lines...? can't seem to place it...
oooh..a cultured group here..I love it.
Hmm not sure which poem ur referring to
Man, you've been posting up a storm since I was last here... when am I gonna read all this...
But I also didn't quite get this post...
:( don't know why this upset me more every time I read it. The picture and music alone, were probably enough.
bas_melech...
welcome back..
yea..I'm sorta unstoppable these days..lol
sara...
Thats ok..its ok to get upset over tragedies
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