Monday, January 08, 2007

Dawn of a new day

Pics...Another Lake dawn. Coffee at dawn

Deep breath
This is my moment
Mine alone
The moment I share with no one
The day in its infancy
Limitless possibility
Hot drink
Time to think
Every sip of coffee
Courses through me
Like a shot of bourbon
Magic light
Goodbye night
Hope rises
With the sun
sun rises
Chases the dark
Everything stark
New, undisturbed
Today will be superb
Can feel it
With the chill
In my bones
Welcome to my moment..



Blogger tuesdaywishes said...

You are really making me wish I drank coffee!

January 08, 2007 4:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Not bad.

January 08, 2007 6:45 PM  
Blogger ~ Sarah ~ said...

very refreshing. especially since here it's boiling hot.

January 08, 2007 8:44 PM  
Blogger the_laamb said...

hmm i hate coffee and i hate waking up early lol

January 09, 2007 6:11 AM  
Blogger Pragmatician said...

Change the coffEe to mint or lemon tea and you so touched on a perfect moment.

January 09, 2007 8:48 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

never too late to start

love ur subtle

we got a long time for that..

hmm I'm speechless...
Have u given them a chance?


I seem to have tapped into an anti coffee chord

January 09, 2007 2:48 PM  
Blogger Open Up! said...

i can hear the birds chirping...

January 09, 2007 5:06 PM  
Blogger megapixel said...

coffee gives you bad breath and turns your teeth gray - not cool
what in g-d s name are you doing up so early

January 09, 2007 10:44 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

not this time of the year...just silence..maybe a wind..

not if u have one a day...and brush regularly
And dawn isnt that early these days...its like 7:15

January 09, 2007 11:33 PM  
Blogger chana said...

you have such a brilliant way with putting your poetry to music, that i was there at dawn too, only not with you because it was a moment i shared with no one...
nice piece :)

January 10, 2007 12:44 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Thanks... Hey even if you were here..I probably wouldnt notice you..all wrapped up in my moment

January 10, 2007 11:01 AM  
Blogger exsemgirl said...

Early mornings??

What are those things????????

January 10, 2007 1:16 PM  
Blogger bellanny said...

hhm... love the picture you paint with words as well as the picture you chose...i hate waking up early but once i am up and have a coffee in my hands it is really nice to watch a new day begin...and the rest of the world come almost feel like you were a part of it...when i wake up really late ( even though i love it) i feel like the day started without me

January 10, 2007 9:50 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...


thats so true..youre witnessing the start of something new..

Well all you late sleepers are in good company. Benjamin Frankln was a notorious late sleeper. He was once woken early..and had this to say..

"I looked at my watch, which goes very well, and found that it was but six o clock; and still thinking it something extraordinary that the sun should rise so early, I looked into the almanac, where I found it to be the hour given for his rising on that day. I looked forward too, and found he was to rise still earlier every day towards the end of June; and that no time during the year he retarded his rising so long as till eight o clock. Your readers, who with me have never seen any sign of sunshine before noon, and seldom regard the astronomical part of the almanac, will be as much astonished as I was, when they hear of his rising so early; and especially when I assure them, that he gives light as soon as he rises. I am convinced of this.

Sly Franklin claimed that a noted philosopher assured him that he was most certainly mistaken, for it was well known that "there could be no light abroad at that hour." His windows had not let the light in, but being open, had let the darkness out.

January 10, 2007 10:09 PM  
Blogger socialworker/frustrated mom said...

Very nice soothing relaxing poetry but still doesn't want to make me drink coffee I will never be coffee drinker lol.

January 11, 2007 9:44 AM  
Blogger kasamba said...

I love the way you write!!!

January 11, 2007 12:21 PM  
Blogger kasamba said...

I love the way you write!!!

January 11, 2007 12:21 PM  
Blogger Moiy-rah said...

a post in a post.

interesting. sh'hechiyanu.


January 11, 2007 5:51 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

wow...Ok..No coffee fr you..




January 11, 2007 8:54 PM  
Blogger shy said...

I LOVE THIS post I so much identify with this I love getting up early (600-630) I love to take my walk then, its so calm and wonderful the fresh air.... You write it so well

January 14, 2007 7:03 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

thanks...Isnt it the best time...?

January 14, 2007 8:33 PM  

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