Monday, January 15, 2007

Wounded, Alive

Wounded animal..
Licking her wounds
The herd moves on
Does anyone care?
Does anyone notice?
Emotional hurt
Try to move
The only ones that will cry
Are the ones watching on imax screens
A world away
What is death?
So cheap
What is life?
Worth fighting for?
How many do you bring down
To live?

Or do you..?
Do you stay
Another day
And another
And find a new kind of life
Perhaps greater
On the greatest of screens
a world away

wounded, alive




Blogger chav said...


another beautiful post.

do you wash dishes?

cuz that's where all my ideas come to me.

January 16, 2007 12:46 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The concept of survival of the fittest is very cruel when it's played out in real life.

January 16, 2007 11:12 AM  
Blogger Open Up! said...

we can't allow our wounds to keep us from moving on with our we nurse ourselves until we feel stronger and move on to live another day and fight another fight...

January 16, 2007 3:26 PM  
Blogger Moiy-rah said...

sorry :(

btw- that picture really scared me...hope none of those animals are lurking in your neighborhood.

go eat a black and white


January 16, 2007 4:51 PM  
Blogger Sara with NO H said...

I felt this post. I wonder if I've been left behind or whom I've left behind.

January 16, 2007 6:55 PM  
Blogger smb said...

Wow, good stuff

January 16, 2007 11:09 PM  
Blogger Pragmatician said...

oi, this stuff is too deep for me.

January 17, 2007 4:29 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Thanks...I eat on
But I see what u mean..the warm soapy water washing over ur hands can be a good stimulant..
I should do it more often..

yes indeed..but here the struggle is not with others..but within u grab and reach for what at that moment seems like "life" to you...or stay behind with the faith that something greater awaits...for ur wounds..

gotta keep fighting..absolutely

what?'d rather have squirrels ripping up ur petunias?

youve definitely left a chunk of u behind..but the wound will close...



January 17, 2007 11:15 AM  
Blogger No Majo, please said...

Nature is cruel and we are sometimes like animals too.

January 17, 2007 12:54 PM  
Blogger Dovid said...

Can I tag you?

January 17, 2007 3:21 PM  
Blogger kasamba said...

Poor vulnerable creature!

January 17, 2007 4:02 PM  
Blogger megapixel said...

that is the way hashem made the world lets not forget that fact.

January 17, 2007 5:07 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

no majo..
that certainly is true..

sure..what are u tagging me with?


what do u mean?

January 17, 2007 8:21 PM  
Blogger Dovid said...

To write about heroes. Who do you look up to?

January 17, 2007 9:01 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

hmmm ok will get to it..
How many?

January 17, 2007 9:11 PM  
Blogger Dovid said...

However many you want. It's just a topic...

January 17, 2007 10:53 PM  
Blogger knaidel maidel said...

Dear Shadchan,
I knew there had to be a man out there who would like to do more dishes because it may be a stimulant for deep insights! FOUND.

January 18, 2007 10:57 PM  

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