Wednesday, February 21, 2007

The Silly Young Duke


There was once upon a time
A great little estate in rhyme
Nestled there between the great peaks
Of the Abramennes and the Sinaidennes
An estate of extraordinary beauty
Owned by the Dukes of the Jacobinian Family
It was a source of great pride, the jewel in the crown
Father to son to son and on down
Surrounded by larger hostile landowners
Yet secure in her mountainous perch

Life was good on the Jacobinian estate

Until that day when it fell to
The silly young Duke Otto

Oh that fateful day

Poor Otto was seen wandering
The hills surrounding
The blessed land
That was his clans
But was now
being plundered
Oh Otto how
Have you blundered
So??

With a shrug you exclaim
To the gate they came
Holding papers. Claims
Claimed that it belonged to them

Shaking him by his lapel
But but why didn’t you repel
Defend
Whats yours?

But, retorted the foolish duke in return
They had proof...
They had arguments
I don’t know


Silly Bloggers...
Defend whats yours
Who cares what others say?
Let them take their claims and proofs
And lay their own stake to the truth
We are secure
in our mountainous perch
The gates closed and secure..


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19 Comments:

Blogger nuch a chosid said...

wow!!!! that was great!!!!

unfortunately The silly duke is young innocent and not properly prepared to fight off all the schemes and swindle arguments he faces.

Thanks for your comment on this topic on my blog.

your poem completes it well.

February 21, 2007 10:16 PM  
Blogger socialworker/frustrated mom said...

Far out man! No really that was a pretty cool tale you tell a smashin story, awesome nimshal:)

February 21, 2007 11:22 PM  
Blogger Lakewood Venter said...

Amen!

February 21, 2007 11:34 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

David - seems to be the topic of choice. First mookie, then Nuch, now you...

Guess Purim really is greater than Yom Kippur. We're all getting into the introspection thing now...

February 22, 2007 12:02 AM  
Blogger Moiy-rah said...

forget blogging become a maggid!

February 22, 2007 12:28 AM  
Blogger Lvnsm27 said...

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February 22, 2007 1:29 PM  
Blogger Lvnsm27 said...

Great poem and message.

February 22, 2007 1:36 PM  
Blogger Semgirl said...

Totally awesome Duke..I mean David..

February 22, 2007 3:30 PM  
Blogger JewishBiFemme said...

Amazing

February 22, 2007 4:56 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

nuch....
Thanks
The silly doesnt know that he doesnt have to heed those at the gate..they have no legal right to his territory..weak indeed..

swfm..
well thanks girl..
totally psychedelic comment..

lv..
!

dreamer...
I had this written up..a few mo nths ago..but mookies and nuchs posts made we want to post it now..

moiy..
I jjust posted a resume on jobseeker.com for magid..I got one response from Ruchtzah though...

lvnsm..
Thanks

Sem...
Thank u Duchess

February 22, 2007 5:00 PM  
Blogger Bas~Melech said...

Cute analogy, but I totally wouldn't have gotten it if I hadn't been following the subject on those other blogs. Otto who? :P

February 22, 2007 5:09 PM  
Blogger Mrs. Jude said...

Good message. I like it.

February 22, 2007 7:17 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

JBF...
I didnt see ur comment!
Thanks..

BM...
Thanks...I thought it was pretty obvious..
Otto the 3rd..y'know..

Mrs J
welcome t my blog..
Thanks

February 22, 2007 7:37 PM  
Blogger Moiy-rah said...

LOL

i bet u were thinking about that joke since last pesach.

nerd :)

February 22, 2007 10:20 PM  
Blogger the only way i know said...

I second Moiy!
Forget blogging, become a maggid

(you can become 'de blogga rebbe')
:-)

February 24, 2007 7:25 PM  
Blogger Lady Delish said...

I must not read enough blogs, I dont know what you guys are referring to! Care to explain?

February 24, 2007 9:24 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

towik...
hmmm not a bad idea..these rebbes make alot of money..

ladydelish...
i'd rather not open ur eyes to them then...

February 24, 2007 9:46 PM  
Blogger It's All Good Now said...

Blogging is great as long as you keep it separate from your real life. When the twain meet, problems abound. So this Purim, I'll drink simultaneously to anonymity as well as to loose fingers.

February 25, 2007 9:10 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

I'll drink to that too..!

February 25, 2007 8:30 PM  

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