Thursday, May 31, 2007

whaddaya nose

I knew all along
It was right here
In front of my nose
I just
Didn’t know
where my nose was..


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Blogger torontopearl said...

This reminds me of Ogden Nash's style.

(have you since found your nose??)

May 31, 2007 7:16 PM  
Blogger Lvnsm27 said...

That happens to all us sometimes.

May 31, 2007 7:50 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

still don't know where mine is...

if anyone finds it, can you tell me?


May 31, 2007 8:24 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Never heard of him..But I'm looking him up on google as we speak..
and yea..I've found where I least expect to


hmm ok I'll keep my eyes open..

btw..u guys realiz theres something deeper here...right?

May 31, 2007 9:00 PM  
Blogger Allie said...

It wouldn't be David if there wasn't something deeper..
On a side note - I have a such a hard time signing your blog, because I don't have a blog myself. Why so discriminating?

June 01, 2007 12:52 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

:-) do have a blog..dont u?

June 01, 2007 10:16 AM  
Blogger socialworker/frustrated mom said...

Makes me think of the old Froot Loop comercials lol.

June 01, 2007 12:40 PM  
Blogger Allie said...

No I don't. I started setting one up so I could post comments here (that's how much I love this blog!). I thought I set up an account but sometimes when I try to sign in it doesn't work. Why did u think I have one - have you somehow read my non-existent blog?

June 01, 2007 12:57 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

lol..havent seen or thought about that one in ages..
follow my always knows...?

goodness..i'm flattered..
so you'd rather I allow anonymous what ur saying?
If anyone clicks on ur name they come to a link to your empty blogs..

June 01, 2007 1:49 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think I'm slowly finding my nose


June 01, 2007 2:02 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

something deeper?

(that was just to make you feel dumb, david)

i feel like that often...

June 01, 2007 2:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Like the picture.
Like the title. (it matches the poem's succinct, unserious style)
Get the point. (You have to understand yourself in order to answer questions, or know where you're going.)
What prompted this?
Good way to express it.

June 01, 2007 3:09 PM  
Blogger Bas~Melech said...


I get the point, but most of your analogies are better (unless maybe I'm getting the point wrong?)

Time for a nose job...

June 01, 2007 5:15 PM  
Blogger Bas~Melech said...

Oh, and Dreamer, I think I saw your nose once but it was such a long time ago I think I forgot :P

June 01, 2007 5:27 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

well..let me know what it looks like so I can help..

hmm I have enough people taking care of that in real life...
..I come here to feel

June 02, 2007 11:16 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

oooh my first anonymous comment
Thanks for your kind words.

Your interpretation is excellent.
What prompted this was. I was getting exasperated trying to get a depressed friend to see all the good in his life right "in front of his nose" no avail.
When I realized that I'd been taking for granted my point of reference (the nose). That perhaps he doesnt have the maturity ot awareness to process whats in front of his nose.

Make any sense?

I wouldnt call this an analogy...
and...thanks for the added pressure..sheesh

June 02, 2007 11:21 PM  
Blogger anonym00kie said...

pretty flowers :P

June 03, 2007 2:19 PM  
Anonymous Allie said...

Did you actually start allowing anonymous comments? Just for me?? Now I'm the one that's flattered..!

June 03, 2007 4:10 PM  
Blogger chav said...

Love it!

Know what draws me here time and time again? You rarely need to explain anything you write. I write well, but you have this depth that my writing lacks.

like my Babi used to say, There's always going to be someone better than you in life, and it's the better man who admires them, not resents them.

June 03, 2007 4:59 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

finally..someone the point..

well...M00kie has been complaining for awhile now..but when I saw ur previous comment..I just had to..

chav... are way too kind..but thanks
Just keep writing..what u feel..just let if flow..
I never wrote a thing before I started its an experience in motion and it keeps changing..
and ur Babi sounds like a smart lady..

June 03, 2007 8:00 PM  
Anonymous Allie said...

Thanks! Sometimes I get in the mood to start a blog but I have no idea what to write about. I always enjoyed writing, but I have not written in ages. So until the creative gene digs itself out of the humdrum-boringness-of-everyday-life that I have unfortunately smothered it under, my blogs will remain empty. In the meantime - I am so excited to be able to easily comment on your blog, I don't know where to start!

June 03, 2007 10:10 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

Just write what you observe and what you think..
When you're alone in the car..your mind wanders..doesnt it..try to remember what you think about and just write. I need music to get my creative juices flowing..some need silence..
Whatever it is..just let it flow..dont fret about what it'll look like..
Comment away..I'll go back and read em

June 03, 2007 10:20 PM  
Anonymous megapixel said...

yay david!
now i can comment cuz before i couldnt - i think i forgot my password or something- whatever, it didnt work.
so, comments, yeah, hmmm
nice stuff!
i like this better than some of your more flowery stuff, but that is just me. I always hated poetry in school, figuring that if you want to say something, why not just say it straight rather than cloud the issue with flowery words. but that's just me. i do agree with many of your opinions.

oh and about your feminist post, as my grandmother says when she sees pregnant mothers dropping off their one year olds at the babysitter, rushing off to work "ah mishigine velt!" stress on the "ah"

June 03, 2007 11:56 PM  
Anonymous Allie said...

Thanks for your encouraging words...
I'd love to go back and comment on all your old posts, but although I spend an undending amount of time online, I don't know if I have that much time... So - here's looking to a brighter future filled with my insightful comments!

June 04, 2007 2:06 AM  
Blogger anonym00kie said...

i just want to say i love the new anonymous/other commenting youve enabled! youre the bestest! :)

June 04, 2007 8:11 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

oh gosh, too?
but..dont u have to login inorder to be able to post on ur blog?
well thanks..but there are certain emotions that prose just cant quite capture...or elicit..
Its like buying a beautiful impressionistic oil paint of Jerusalem..and then saying..hey why dont you just buy a picture..if its jerusalem you want to see..

and yes..ah meshiggineh velt is right..

sounds good..

wow..thats all it took?

June 04, 2007 1:58 PM  
Blogger ba1 said...

oh, Anonymous was me. I think I also got a blogger name originally in order to comment on your blog! Yes, makes sense, thanks.

June 04, 2007 11:12 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

ahh everyones crawling out of the woodwork..

June 05, 2007 10:40 AM  

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