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posted by David_on_the_Lake at 2:27 PM
ok so.. i dont know if its my conscience but.. reading about this boy felt like reading about myself - reading about something i live and have lived through so many times in my life. the most current situation is in regards to this whole blogging business. the appeal, luring me in with the shine and grandeur of 'knowledge' and then the sad reality that ive stooped so low and let myself get carried away by the cynicism and negativity and heresy out there...and somehow, despite how empty and false it all is at the end of the day... ending back thereday after dayamazing how you were able to portray that thru this story. you are so talented.
oh.. and the part about the kid seeing a human form climb up.. is SO great. that's how it always starts doesnt it.. as soon as we know that SOMEONE is doing what we shouldnt be doing our inhibitions disapear. suddenly "if theyre not strong enough to overcome.. who am i to try?"youre just brilliant :)
wow, great writingsometimes an individual needs to go through it to fully understand the consequences.
i agree with mookie.so, what should we all do about it?oh, brilliant and wise david, please advise us of the correct path to choose.
there's no "e" in hasn't.
m00kie...right on the mark...as usual...and stop with the accolades..its unnecesary..lollvnsm...'thanksthats very true...dreamer...Come back to me in 3 days time my child...anon..this is tru:-)
m00ks..this is really about the decent into sin..of any nature..The story is full of clues of the intricacies of how the yetzer hora works..
three days?guess you're not so brilliant after all...
dreamer..I'd be the first to agree with that..
A M A Z I N G POST!!!Every detail resonates deeper.And so well written.Why don't you do prose more often?(I like your poetry, too. But this is one. amazing. post.)
Thanks Bas_MI like to mix it up. But prose is more difficult for my unorganized mind...lol
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ok so.. i dont know if its my conscience but.. reading about this boy felt like reading about myself - reading about something i live and have lived through so many times in my life. the most current situation is in regards to this whole blogging business. the appeal, luring me in with the shine and grandeur of 'knowledge' and then the sad reality that ive stooped so low and let myself get carried away by the cynicism and negativity and heresy out there...
and somehow, despite how empty and false it all is at the end of the day... ending back there
day after day
amazing how you were able to portray that thru this story. you are so talented.
oh.. and the part about the kid seeing a human form climb up.. is SO great. that's how it always starts doesnt it.. as soon as we know that SOMEONE is doing what we shouldnt be doing our inhibitions disapear. suddenly "if theyre not strong enough to overcome.. who am i to try?"
youre just brilliant :)
wow, great writing
sometimes an individual needs to go through it to fully understand the consequences.
i agree with mookie.
so, what should we all do about it?
oh, brilliant and wise david, please advise us of the correct path to choose.
there's no "e" in hasn't.
m00kie...
right on the mark...as usual...
and stop with the accolades..its unnecesary..lol
lvnsm...
'thanks
thats very true...
dreamer...
Come back to me in 3 days time my child...
anon..
this is tru
:-)
m00ks..
this is really about the decent into sin..of any nature..
The story is full of clues of the intricacies of how the yetzer hora works..
three days?
guess you're not so brilliant after all...
dreamer..
I'd be the first to agree with that..
A M A Z I N G POST!!!
Every detail resonates deeper.
And so well written.
Why don't you do prose more often?
(I like your poetry, too. But this is one. amazing. post.)
Thanks Bas_M
I like to mix it up. But prose is more difficult for my unorganized mind...lol
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