Fate
David Abramson hated this part of his day.
26 years 4 months and 11 days that he’s been taking the F train into Manhattan every morning. With his drab grey suit and worn expression he fit into the swaying environment. Scratch grafitti, advertisements, white ipod headphones and Mr. Abramson all swaying to the clitter clatter of the tracks in silent commune.
March 14th followed March 13th because that’s what March 14ths are supposed to do. This was the type of stability he relished. And on this March 14th he took his seat under the map of the NYC subway system, his left ear aligned with Coney Island. The train was emptier than usual. His small brown eyes scanned the train slowly, analyzing each of his fellow riders. There was the usual smorgasbord of Russian women, Latino teenagers, Frum businessmen and Asian hipsters. All except for one person sitting directly across the way who looked terribly out of place. He’d never seen someone so big before. The man mustve been at least 6’8 and as broad as an oak tree. Dressed almost completely in black contrasting his slicked back white hair and brilliant, piercing blue eyes. He sat there staring directly at David almost completely blocking the advertising for The Bahamas behind him. Davids eyes would normally start closing after 5 minutes of getting to mentally know his mates but this man would not let him sleep.
Mercifully after 3 stops the giant stood up to duck out of his world into the dark station beyond the opening doors. But just before he stepped out he looked at David and nodded as he handed him his newspaper. David whispered a flustered Thank You and placed it on his lap.
It was a New York Post and the Headlines read Alberto Gonzalez Resigns. He thought that was strange as none of the radio stations reported that in the morning. It was then that his face paled a few shades as his eyes scanned the date March 21,2007. His head jerked around out the window as the train pulled out slowly but his giant was nowhere to be seen. He opened to the next page, his fingers shaking and started reading. Story after article after article..section after section..The Rangers are out of the playoffs The Nets are in..People murdered..fires..accidents yet to happen. He felt his chest tighten as if this huge burden had been placed on his shoulders..should he warn people that will die in 6 days time? What should he do with this information?? Perhaps he shouldn’t be playing with fate..the last thing he wanted was to be the subject of some bloggers science fiction tale of a man that changed the course of the world.
Then he closed his eyes leaned back and laughed, this must be a joke. Some sick prankster with nothing better to do but print fake papers and drop it on harried looking passengers. He folded the paper tight but just before he got off he jotted down next weeks lotto numbers on a small piece of paper and stuffed it into his pocket hurriedly, looking around as if the whole world knew his secret.
After exiting the train he placed it into the closest garbage pail and it dropped down onto a bed of rotting food leftovers.
However there was one section that he neglected to read as most of us neglect to. We don’t like to read the obituaries, to remember and think about the strangers that used to inhabit the seats next to us on the train. That is truly a shame for had he glanced at that page he would’ve read the 3rd listing from the bottom
David Abramson, 52
Found slumped over
in his car in the parking lot
of the Lottery Commision
of an apparent heart attack
Leaves a loving wife and
3 children.
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42 Comments:
Sick story.
Yours are usually more positive.
Sorry.
:(
This is sad and kind of upsetting to read:( Nice writing though!:)
dreamer..dreamer..
sick?..yikes
Positive..doesnt mean smiley..hunky dory all day long...If that what u want..theres always sesamestreet.org :-P
There is room for other emotions..
Did you at least think into the very deep lessons lurking behind this "sick" story?
swfm....
sorry to upset..
thanks..
Morbid.....
david - i know positive doesn't mean hunky dory all day long.
that's not what i meant.
even within a sad story, one can come out with a positive outlook or a negative outlook on life.
this one's negative.
and the other commenters agree with me so far.
so there.
:)
Nope, I don't see any deep lessons.
What are you trying to say - read the obituaries? Take everything in your life as a sign? Don't take things from strangers in the subway? Don't be superstitious?
Don't tempt fate?
I may see all these in the story, but it sure doesn't make me want to act on them.
Sorry.
:(
You didn't upset me I meant the story is an upsetting story.
Ok ..
Heres what I meant by this..
We know that the world is run by Hashem..and we have very little to do with controling our futures etc..
But we sometimes think we can twist fate when it comes to certain things like money (lotto numbers)..
But eventually...the power of fate will fly in your face so severely..
Now go back and read it...
and quit frowning..
Still morbid...
True..
some aspects of life are morbid..we can face that
I have to disagree with all the commenters who find this sick, morbid or some other choice negative adjective.
I find this to be a most Powerful post! Perhaps, your best post to date!
i have to agree with lakewood venter to disagree wth those who dindt like this post..
i loved it!
you are so talented.
as much as im aware of my surroundings and try to be self aware..i always wonder what im "missing". this is the exact kind of thing that scares me, but keeps me focused.. this is the kind of weird mystery that keeps life interesting..
so easy to get lost in our patterns of thinking, percieving.. so easy to miss out on the real clues..
powerful message
(only one complaint, why did you have to call him david?!)
(oh..im not sure if im back, but this was worth coming back for! :)
sounds like a Twilight Zone episode.
Great writing!
mookie- Actually, the fact that he named him David was actually cool.
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Okay I take it back but it's your fault because your posts are so damn deep and good and half the time I don't know what the heck it is really talking about until you explain it in the comments lol.
Sorry.
I still agree with myself.
:)
And we can't really twist fate. What's meant to happen to us will happen, no matter what.
So, you like my smiles, huh?
LOL.
mookie - can you come back for good?
pwetty pwease?
LV..
Thank you..
Mooks...
Thanks...Good observations...
wow..I'm honored...Please stick around..
as for the choice of names..well that was his name..
:-)
Chav...
Thanks..
oooh I loved the twilightzone..
swfm...
Sorry...
Truth is theres so much depth everywhere..
dreamer...
Youre such an Akshin
Of course I like smiles..just not 24/7 y'know..
Theres a fine line between smiley and creepy lol
and besides..just because i dont like frowns doesnt mean I love smileys
:-|
it's good to be an akshin sometimes. yes, that's one of my major traits.
smiley and creepy? guess you're thinking of the joker.
lol.
you would prefer a grim face?
what a weirdo.
:P
:-) :-( :-/ :-P :-& :-@ :-J :-K Take your pick! lol
dreamer...
yes I agree...an akshin can be a very good trait if chanelled correctly...not sure this qualifies though
lol
and there is a happy medium beween smiley and grim..
pensive?
serious?
thoughtful?
pleasent?
I dnt smile much personally..people notice that about me..but I never look grim or sad..
LV...
can I have one of each?
LV - I'll leave you with the second, third and last, and take the rest for myself.
:P
david - well, i do smile a lot in real life. and people notice that about me, too.
maybe start smiling.
it's good for you.
:)
dreamer...
its ok..I smile when I need to..
smiling is a new mishegoss..People used to have serious expressions...i think it expressed what was going on better..
If youre a serious/thoughtful person..then u should lok like one..
lol
people did NOT always have serious expressions. They just had serious expressions in pictures.
and you take that back, fellow blogger! I'm a serious thoughtful person, but with a happy disposition. Is that okay with you?
Oh, and did you ever see pictures of R' Shlomo Zalman Aurbach, zt"l?
Always smiling.
:)
David, you are so unbelievably creative. Whew!!
NEAT!
didja think of this all urself?
walla i really like it
(i suspect im gonna get annoyed by some comments though, so i shall refrain from readin em :) )
The story was great, well written and powerful as usual. But the ending was so morbid. I think you could have done better... such a great story needs a more meaningful punchline.
I like the suspense, though... I'm still wondering what actually happens next week :P So many blanks left for the reader to fill in, I don't deal well with those :(
Well, although I haven't really been around much......I loved that story,and it was worth coming back for!!
So ironic, satiric, whatever... really gets to you.
My type of story. Makes you go...Oh my! (in a sorta shocked way) and 'heh heh' (in a pleasantly-surprised-at-the-ironic- ending type of way)!!
Missed reading your blog, but glad I did for now (although who knows the next time I'll be here again..)
the_dreamer...
for every R'Shlomo Zalmen that ull show me ..I'll show u 100 R'Elyashev..R'Chaim Kanievskys..etc...
itsallgood...
Thank you
Sabra...
Yup...
Thank u..
and good idea...not to read the comments..lol
bas_melech...
Thanks. Well..its fun to fill in the blanks..
workingema...
wow long time no see...
Come back soon..
David - the comments make it all the more fun!
:P
I think my next post is gonna be grim and morbid.
You're getting me in the mood.
weird, yet facinating story.
Do you read Kiekeboe?
dreamer...
true true...
ooh cant wait to see
prag...
Thanks (i think)
nope never heard of him..But I'll guess he writes weird things
:-)
of course very depressing but interesting as well. it so sad how i can almost relate. so many people do the same old thing and then its to late to make a difference.
i like ur depth
and ur writing
good one
p.s. smiling is a good thing - it connects people and spreads warmth.
in my book, it aint no contradiction to a thinking person or a serious time.
:)
LOVE this post
Thanks Chaya
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!
chelmo Tovo Chaziso!!! Tove Hu V'tuvo Lehave
Nuch..
Vuss zoogsti?
Nuch... if you're saying something profound, I want to hear! Translation, please?
I second that
first time to find such an author/blogger! i agree it's morbid. the big stoic messenger who couldn't keep his eyes off of you, and wouldn't let you rest--maybe if you would've responded differently, he might have held onto his paper/message?
thoughts beget thoughts. i'm a sucker for happy endings!
Julie..
welcome..
Well..I dont know if the paper itself per se was a bad thing..it's the way he responded to it.
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