Love
In honor of the first day of spring..dedicated to my wife...
Love
Like small seeds
Sometimes needs
To be placed within
Some dirt to begin
Its journey
upward
The primal earth
Develops
Envelops
Your everything
Your very being
It does grow
Often slow
Colors concealed
suddenly
............. Revealed
then
Winter comes
Flowers die
Icy patches..
Underground
Patient
Lie the seeds
The bulbs
The memories
Don’t let it freeze
Love will blossom
Again
.
posted by David_on_the_Lake at 2:51 PM
15 Comments:
Beautiful! How romantic!!
beautiful.
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Wow.
If you're someone that truly feels and acts upon what you write, then your wife is truly fortunate.
Wow.
If you're someone that truly feels and acts upon what you write, then your wife is truly fortunate.
Very moving, got any extra tissues?
JBF...and Sarah...
Thanks
Dreamer...
well...this poem is not a reflection of anything I do..
Its a reflection of relationships..the ups and downs...and the belief even when this seem to be frozen...it will blossom again..if the seeds are right.
swfm...
Nope..
all the tissues were used up in the comments of last post..with that nasty cold going around..lol
awww.so mushy!
This is a really nice one. Such a positive ending. You should do that more often. :)
mean to say your wife views your blog....
LV...
is that good or bad?
BM...
Hey...theres always a spring right around the corner..
OOA..
she reads everything I write..and this was written for her..and presented to her..more romantically than on a blogpost I might add..just thought I'd share.
Stunning!
You have such a keen appreciation for everything so many take for granted.
"It does grow
Often slow
Colors concealed
suddenly
............. Revealed"
Powerful and true!!
Those married for more then just a few years can attest to that.
it only gets better! like an old wine!!!
shpitzle..
Thanks
nuch..
the longer ur married..if the foundation is strong enough..u can weather even the coldest winters...
.......... :(
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