Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Love




In honor of the first day of spring..dedicated to my wife...

Love
Like small seeds
Sometimes needs
To be placed within
Some dirt to begin
Its journey
upward
The primal earth
Develops
Envelops
Your everything
Your very being
It does grow
Often slow
Colors concealed
suddenly
............. Revealed

then
Winter comes
Flowers die
Icy patches..
Underground
Patient
Lie the seeds
The bulbs
The memories
Don’t let it freeze
Love will blossom
Again


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15 Comments:

Blogger JewishBiFemme said...

Beautiful! How romantic!!

March 21, 2007 4:33 PM  
Blogger ~ Sarah ~ said...

beautiful.

March 21, 2007 5:24 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

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March 21, 2007 5:47 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

Wow.

If you're someone that truly feels and acts upon what you write, then your wife is truly fortunate.

March 21, 2007 5:48 PM  
Blogger The Dreamer said...

Wow.

If you're someone that truly feels and acts upon what you write, then your wife is truly fortunate.

March 21, 2007 5:48 PM  
Blogger socialworker/frustrated mom said...

Very moving, got any extra tissues?

March 21, 2007 8:28 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

JBF...and Sarah...
Thanks

Dreamer...
well...this poem is not a reflection of anything I do..

Its a reflection of relationships..the ups and downs...and the belief even when this seem to be frozen...it will blossom again..if the seeds are right.

swfm...
Nope..
all the tissues were used up in the comments of last post..with that nasty cold going around..lol

March 21, 2007 8:37 PM  
Blogger Lakewood Venter said...

awww.so mushy!

March 21, 2007 9:38 PM  
Blogger Bas~Melech said...

This is a really nice one. Such a positive ending. You should do that more often. :)

March 21, 2007 11:48 PM  
Blogger Out Of Africa said...

mean to say your wife views your blog....

March 22, 2007 10:05 AM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

LV...
is that good or bad?

BM...
Hey...theres always a spring right around the corner..

OOA..
she reads everything I write..and this was written for her..and presented to her..more romantically than on a blogpost I might add..just thought I'd share.

March 22, 2007 1:31 PM  
Blogger Shpitzle Shtrimpkind said...

Stunning!

You have such a keen appreciation for everything so many take for granted.

March 23, 2007 12:38 AM  
Blogger nuch a chosid said...

"It does grow
Often slow
Colors concealed
suddenly
............. Revealed"

Powerful and true!!

Those married for more then just a few years can attest to that.
it only gets better! like an old wine!!!

March 25, 2007 3:48 PM  
Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

shpitzle..
Thanks

nuch..
the longer ur married..if the foundation is strong enough..u can weather even the coldest winters...

March 25, 2007 10:21 PM  
Blogger Chaya S. Klein said...

.......... :(

May 04, 2011 5:31 AM  

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